The Unknowns Scene 1 Opening 4 Pages

Hey all!  Here is your teaser for The Unknowns.  The opening four pages of the book.  I hope you enjoy them.  From here on out I will only have little snipits and glimpses until the book releases next year.  But I thought it would be fun to show you all these pages.  You can also compare these pages to the original pitch I made three years ago!  you can find those here: ORIGINAL PITCH

And look for a new production blog piece on the development of the visual look of this book.  Coming very soon.

4 thoughts on “The Unknowns Scene 1 Opening 4 Pages”

  1. Now I’ve been well and truly teased twice! 😉

    I wonder what the deal is with Chloe saying she “nailed it” just as the ball leaves her hands. Is she that good at telling where it’ll end up? Or is it just something she says for luck or fun? Or is she talking to herself as if she’s someone else, like she seems to do in the last panel? Peculiar!

  2. I intended it more that she is that good that she knows she hit it before it even left her hands. 🙂 Glad you like it though. It’s coming together quickly. And if this process goes the way I would like, FDTN will be back soon using it soon too!

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